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Jenna Frenzel

  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Harry Potter and the Alternate Ending

    I liked it a lot--even enough to say that I loved it. Your voice sounded almost identical to JK's, and I think that your ending is more in her style ...

    Jul 4, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Title yet to be determined

    I like it, though I found it a bit of a cliche. I only found a few problems: Her walls were so covered in posters and magazine clippings, that the ...

    May 19, 2008
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Burned

    All in all I thought this was very very good: it caught my attention at once, with the panic surrounding the fire. There was, however, some punctuation problems and the ...

    May 13, 2008
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: To all the lonely hearts

    This was really beautiful and well-written. I only found a couple of punctuation and spacing mistakes and the font and spacing are sort of a distraction from the text and ...

    May 12, 2008
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: The Small God

    Congressional employees collectively breath a sigh of relief as they once again can go to work in jeans and practice their putting in the Congressman’s office. The only thing I ...

    May 12, 2008


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